Feedback for 1.2: Introduction

Clarity: 4/5
Quality: 4/5
Relevance: 5/5
Structure: 2/5

Errors:
Suggestions:

– sponsoring shown much too long

– best to split off the case description from the explanation of model/features/…

– I’m not a fan of the angle of the explanation: again, this is about tabular data, but images are shown as the only thing that matters. There’s no harm in already giving a brief referral to computer vision, but more than that (e.g. explaining pixels, different lighting conditions) is probably not appropriate at this point. I would start from a tabular description, and then briefly mention that another option is to let the machine look at the images directly (+ refer to other module).

Location: AI for Materials Industry » Case 1: Defect detection on steel plates using tabular data » 1.2: Introduction

Clarity: 4/5
Quality: 4/5
Relevance: 5/5
Structure: 2/5

Errors:
Suggestions:

– sponsoring shown much too long

– best to split off the case description from the explanation of model/features/…

– I’m not a fan of the angle of the explanation: again, this is about tabular data, but images are shown as the only thing that matters. There’s no harm in already giving a brief referral to computer vision, but more than that (e.g. explaining pixels, different lighting conditions) is probably not appropriate at this point. I would start from a tabular description, and then briefly mention that another option is to let the machine look at the images directly (+ refer to other module).

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